Wow. That was wow. The very manifestation of wow. I like reading second person POVs - when done right, they suck you in like first and third person can't quite accomplish, and this was done right times about a billion.
First, I adored the idea that Sam the Antichrist is fighting Lucifer. I could see it going that way, and, yes, please, Mr. Kripke. Exactly like that. Dean as concubine, DMV demons, and Sam's dimples were all wonderful whipped cream on a bowl of fresh strawberries. Second, as always, your writing style was absolutely captivating. I could read this forever. And I kind of want to. Finally, congratulations on creating a fascinating and very cool original female character. She's fucking awesome, and I'd love to see more of her.
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First, I adored the idea that Sam the Antichrist is fighting Lucifer. I could see it going that way, and, yes, please, Mr. Kripke. Exactly like that. Dean as concubine, DMV demons, and Sam's dimples were all wonderful whipped cream on a bowl of fresh strawberries. Second, as always, your writing style was absolutely captivating. I could read this forever. And I kind of want to. Finally, congratulations on creating a fascinating and very cool original female character. She's fucking awesome, and I'd love to see more of her.
To recap - you are made of win, as is this story!