Ack, I'm all choked up right now! I admit the POV threw me at first but in this situation I think you really worked it; makes it a lot easier to identify with the narrator and get inside her head without the disconnect of 1st- or 3rd- person. I also really love the tension that runs throughout the whole piece with the balance of "WOW THIS IS HOT" and "Wow, this is a really scary, fucked up situation." Amazing job, yet again. ♥