Jesus god that was fantastic. Best use of 2nd person I've seen in, uh, like ever. Just wow.
Plus, loved the title and the first line. I have too many tabs open, and I'd decided not to start any other stories until I close some of them, but that first line was irresistable.
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Date: 2009-08-03 04:28 am (UTC)Plus, loved the title and the first line. I have too many tabs open, and I'd decided not to start any other stories until I close some of them, but that first line was irresistable.