Where to begin? This is wonderful. I kinda wish there had been a camera on me as I read it, because my responses were CLASSIC. I gasped, I started, I threw my hands up over my mouth... Amazing. You surprised me so many times with the plot, the turns, and the emotion. I got teary more than once.
Beautiful characterizations, perfect pacing, and SAMNDEEEEEN. The best way to waste spend time at work EVER.
Great job!
(Edit for LJ thinking I was done before I was. Dammit.)
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Date: 2010-07-09 07:12 pm (UTC)Where to begin? This is wonderful. I kinda wish there had been a camera on me as I read it, because my responses were CLASSIC. I gasped, I started, I threw my hands up over my mouth... Amazing. You surprised me so many times with the plot, the turns, and the emotion. I got teary more than once.
Beautiful characterizations, perfect pacing, and SAMNDEEEEEN. The best way to
wastespend time at work EVER.Great job!
(Edit for LJ thinking I was done before I was. Dammit.)