I really, really, really loved this story! You did an amazing job! First, it was so scary! I read it over several sittings, including on my commute, and when I got to my destination and the subway station was weirdly empty, I found myself getting really anxious. :)
I loved the way you portrayed each character, their dilemmas and their relationships. I loved the way you wove the different pieces of canon together. I loved Jess's Oregon Trail reference!
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Date: 2011-06-18 11:54 am (UTC)I loved the way you portrayed each character, their dilemmas and their relationships. I loved the way you wove the different pieces of canon together. I loved Jess's Oregon Trail reference!
What an amazing read! Well done!